Template 1
Reference specific public work
{first_name}, the {project} writeup is rare. Most teams skip the {specific_decision} step. We're hiring for a role where that judgment matters. Want to compare notes on how the team thinks about {topic} for 15 min?Why it worksAsks for a comparison conversation, not an interview. Senior ICs reply at 3-4x the normal rate.
Template 2
Salary-transparent intro
{first_name}, hiring a {role}. Comp band {salary_band} + equity, remote-first, team has shipped {ship_proof}. Want to take a 20-min look or pass it on to someone in your network?Why it worksSalary in DM cuts the dance. Senior candidates respect the directness.
Template 3
Founder-direct DM (no recruiter middle layer)
{first_name}, founder at {company} sending this myself. We're 12 people, $X ARR. Read your {public_work} this morning, would be a great first eng hire. Open to 30 min to see what we're building?Why it worksFounder-direct DMs have ~5x the senior-IC reply rate of recruiter DMs. Worth the founder's time.
Template 4
Re-engagement on a past "not now"
{first_name}, we talked back in {month}. You said "ping me if X happens". X happened: {specific_change}. Worth a 20-min check-in or want another quarter?Why it worksListening is rare. Following up on the actual condition you set is rarer.
Template 5
Connection request from a hiring manager
{first_name}, I'm {hiring_manager_role} at {company}. Connecting because of {specific_reason}, not for an immediate ask. Happy to share how the team thinks about {topic} if it'd be useful.Why it worksHiring-manager connection requests get accepted ~50% of the time when the reason is specific.